Like many readers, I was shocked when I read this article, published recently in The Chronicle of Higher Education, on the issue of students, purportedly a good number of them international students, using custom essay writing services offered by paid providers. What most surprised me was the level of sophistication of this activity and, of course, the cynical perspective provided by Mr. Dante, the so-called “shadow scholar.” Is it true that there is a whole industry being created around the writing of school assignments? Apparently, like it or not, it looks like this is the case. Also, unsettling as it may be, this account at least provides an opportunity for serious discussion and analysis of this real problem in higher education.
It is clear to me that the disturbing act of cheating through commissioning the writing of academic papers results from a combination of factors. They include, among other things, the poor ethics of both cheating students and of the writers doing academic work for a fee; the teachers’ unwillingness or incapacity to verify the authenticity and ownership of the work submitted by students; institutionally induced increased class sizes, which make it more difficult for teachers to follow-up on the individual work of students; and the emergence of technology as an enabler of rapid communication and transfer of information anywhere and anytime.
Is this a problem unique to the U.S.? No. Unfortunately, this problem plagues most countries. Services like the one described by Mr. Dante are available in many countries, in many languages, and at varying prices. A simple search on Google produces hundreds of sites offering these services. In my visits to universities in different countries I frequently find related information –sometimes even published in school newspapers – about companies or just entrepreneurial individuals offering a variety of services pompously named academic tutoring, writing coaching, language polishing, proof-editing, and even more plainly, writing of papers or even theses. The U.S. is not the exception.
Is this a problem that will disappear? I am afraid that is improbable. It is simple economics. As long as teachers create a demand for these services by requiring independent papers and written projects, some students will be ready to pay for essay writing services, especially when they know that the verification of the work’s authenticity is difficult. Under these conditions, suppliers will continue to avail their writing services. Ultimately, in today’s higher education environment, cheaters know that this practice is feasible and that in an overwhelming majority of cases no one gets caught.
This problem is exacerbated by the fact that the average number of students per classroom has been increasing in the U.S. as it has in most other countries, and there has been a concurrent proliferation of distance education based courses. Evidently, the larger the class size, the lesser is the available opportunity for close interaction and supervision of students by the teacher.
When I was teaching at the National University of Mexico, some years ago, I found it impossible to evaluate individual academic papers for my over 300 students, so I had to implement other types of evaluation. More recently, I vividly remember my visit to University of Alexandria in Egypt, where an average sized class in some cases was 1,500 students (yes, 1,500!). When I asked faculty members how they evaluate student learning they just smiled at me. Their silence provided an obvious response.
Is there something we can do to reduce this problem? Yes. Institutions must be serious in providing plenty of information and guidance to new students about which practices are acceptable and which are not. Some institutions, such as American University, have established mandatory entrance courses on Academic Integrity and Academic Writing in which they not only guide students on how to improve their writing, but also educate their students to understand what they consider the meaning of academic integrity to be and how to achieve it by preventing practices that are not acceptable. This is especially important in the case of international students considering that in some countries the limits and meaning of those terms are different.
At the classroom level, there is no doubt that faculty members can and must do more. As a colleague with longstanding experience in teaching explained to me, a very simple way to corroborate the authenticity of the work by the student is to ask for an abstract written in the classroom and compare it later with the previously finished work. Additional ways are to require an improvised oral presentation or to connect what the student has presented to specific questions on a test. In other words, more thought and dedication from faculty members could help to reduce this problem. Unfortunately, teachers do not always have additional time available to provide for these added procedures nor the willingness to implement them for their students.
Another way to reduce the temptation for students looking for outside help is establishing more realistic academic expectations and better connecting regular in-class assignments with the expected outcomes. Let’s be honest – we know that some faculty members often assign work as if their class is the only one the student is taking and require that they read and digest wildly excessive amounts of material, which everyone involved knows will ultimately not be read, at least not with the profundity that the teacher would like. Assuming that the student will produce a decent final paper well-connected to all the material that he or she did not have the time or interest to read is simply unrealistic. I am not arguing that faculty members should reduce the academic rigor of their courses, but rather that some of them need to be more realistic about what can reasonably be achieved. Volume doesn’t equate with quality.
Then there is the case of international students who are studying in the U.S. in a second language. The “shadow scholar” talks about ELS students as among his main clients. Portraying foreign students as cheaters does a great disservice to the majority of honest ones among them and contributes to reinforcing negative stereotypes about these students. Obviously, if institutions are accepting students –both foreign and domestic- with limited language proficiency, one can expect that it is the responsibility of the institution to provide conditions for those incoming students within which they can reach the minimum language proficiency standards and also to establish appropriate filters preventing students who cannot attain the minimum standards from studying at the institution. Institutions cannot play the ambiguous role of, on the one hand, responding to budgetary concerns by increasing international enrollment through some form of relaxation of language proficiency standards and, on the other hand, doing nothing or an inadequate job of remediating those deficiencies once students are on campus. In other words, more and better evaluation is required.
In the U.S., foreign students are expected to have a minimum level of English language competency usually measured by achieving a certain score on the TOEFL. There has been plenty of work done by many scholars showing that the TOEFL only partially measures English fluency. Is the solution then to establish stricter English competency entrance requirements? I don’t think so. In my opinion, the real issue is not whether the student can write correctly in English (which can be resolved with remedial education or even just a good translation), but rather whether or not the student can effectively search for information, correctly articulate ideas, and build a coherent argument, even if it is in the student’s own native language. Let’s not forget that language is merely a means – albeit a very important one – for the transmission of knowledge rather that an end in and of itself.
At the very least Dante’s article has value in forcing us to place this issue on the examination table where it can be discussed and addressed. Are we prepared for this conversation in U.S. higher education?



17 Responses to Cheating and Academic Integrity: an International Perspective on ‘The Shadow Scholar’
raymond_j_ritchie - December 7, 2010 at 6:20 pm
This paper covers much the same ground as Mr Dante’s original. One easy way to stop students downloading student papers is to make them write them out longhand while you are watching them. Giving them the questions beforehand or not is up to you. My experience is that it makes no difference and so the actor-types who memorise essays are relatively rare.
Giving students two or three amusing little articles you found in Nature or Science and asking them to assess them in 3hrs in an examination hall is also great fun. You will catch the actor types. You will find you will need the full marking scale from 0 to 100.
But remember: you will get rewarded with dreadful and spiteful student assessments of your teaching.
The leader to this article is misleading. I thought it would be about the fact that you come across more than a few papers in the literature where the paper does not tally with the person you meet at their workplace or at a conference. This is not a trivial problem. Lives depend on the validity of our scientific knowledge base. It is seriously compromised when you pause to think who is getting the jobs.
In my own case, I do admit that people are sometimes stunned when they meet me. I have a rather brutish-truck-driver look about me. I do not look intelligent. I am so lucky I was not chucked into some home for retarded children (or worse). However, I do love the sound of my own voice, know that my intelligence is the only asset I have, and I leave no doubt who it was who wrote all my papers. I am a real, not pretend, NERD.
There are an awful lot of ghost-written PhDs, scientific papers, and grant proposals around but not many who really want to know. Of course multiple authorship and heirarchies of authorship make such problems worse.
rsmulcahy - December 7, 2010 at 6:41 pm
You can prepare for this conversation all you want but I don’t see to what end and anyone in this day and age who is shocked and surprised by the prior article’s assertion of student cheating is a bit naive. Anyway, if someone is willing to go to a custom paper writer, then there is no way to craft a “unique” prompt or paper assignment to outwit the perpetrator. Sure, with the cheaper paper mills, you can run plagiarism checks of electronic documents and catch people that way. But with the “shadow scholar” the forensics would be too time consuming. Are you going to ask that each student turn in all their notes, articles, web pages and books used to write the paper? Interview them and ask them to explain their work to you? Not going to happen. As for the abstract written in class solution, am I to understand that a professor/TA is going to compare hundreds of abstracts to the actual papers and then make a decision that the abstract is close or not close enough to prove ownership. Worse, you would end up with a lot of abstracts that would prove neither guilt nor innocence and would necessitate a second round of authorship confirmation. And…to back up one level, what is the meaning and importance of “academic integrity”? Important to whom? Students practice “soft plagiarism” day in and day out, appropriating bits and pieces of others’ work and passing it off as their own. Hell, from the reports I see on-line there are plenty of PhD researchers doing the same thing. Why do people want to believe higher education is immune from the same social/economic forces (diseases)that affect the rest of society? Yeah, yeah, the “life of the mind” is precious and all that poor academics have are their ideas and those ideas have to acknowledged and celebrated, not stolen and mis-attributed. Sounds good in general, but do you think a mass, consumer education market cares about this Ivory Tower mythology? Too many people now attend “college” in some form or another to make preserving this idea of academic honor relevant and information technology makes cheating ever-more convenient and doable. Is this cynical? I guess, but I would rather look at what is real. perhaps, structural strain theory from sociology can help. When people are denied the “official path” to societal rewards (education, careers, status) they can either “reject” the reward system and drop out or they can “innovate” and find alternative means to the same end. Considering that the vast majority of people studying in college will never have the word “scholar” even remotely attached to their name, do not find their identity as an academic, and merely want to graduate and get on with their life, I seriously doubt the efficacy of “freshmen ethics orientations.” More and more students enter higher education with remedial needs and the inability to express themselves clearly through writing. I am sure this trend will be correlated with a sharp increase in students following unenforceable honor codes. Let the cream rise to the top, true students and scholars will do what they will do well and with honor and the rest can slough off with their degrees and serve me my double-tall lattes at Starbucks.
rsmulcahy - December 7, 2010 at 6:56 pm
To Mr. Ritchie,
You wrote:
“I am so lucky I was not chucked into some home for retarded children (or worse). However, I do love the sound of my own voice, know that my intelligence is the only asset I have, and I leave no doubt who it was who wrote all my papers. I am a real, not pretend, NERD.”
So, you look gruff (apparently even as a child you were mistaken for a truck driver?), not intelligent and retarded. Wow, you have managed to offend three different groups of people in a couple of sentences. Your statements are offensive…a “home for retarded children”???? So you think that people that are not a 9 on an attractiveness scale are commonly associated with being mentally handicapped. Did your parents tell you were lucky they didn’t throw you into a retarded home (whatever the hell that is). The nut don’t fall far from the tree so that would explain a lot. Anyway, the fact you could write that offensive nonsense and then pump up your intelligence as your best asset is laughable. You should apologize to all families who have mentally handicapped children. Your best asset seems to be the ability to write without thinking.
vernaye - December 7, 2010 at 7:06 pm
“I am not arguing that faculty members should reduce the academic rigor of their courses, but rather that some of them need to be more realistic about what can reasonably be achieved.”
Yes, you are. This is exactly the same euphemistic way every institution I’ve seen puts it: we’re not lowering our standards, we’re just being “realistic.”
vernaye - December 7, 2010 at 7:09 pm
I should add that this problem of cheating and academic integrity will never go away until people learn the true nature of being ethical – which is that you do the right thing because (a) you want to, not because someone is wielding a big stick and (b) it is in your self-interest, since clearly at the moment it is not.
The lack of ethics on the part of cheating students mirrors the lack of ethics of university administrators.
quidditas - December 8, 2010 at 7:19 am
“The lack of ethics on the part of cheating students mirrors the lack of ethics of university administrators.”
Considering students have more contact with faculty than admin, I find it odd to offload their failure to “learn the true nature of being ethical” on admin.
4206dinty - December 8, 2010 at 9:44 am
Well now::: How many research papers and dissertations were written by a Ph.D candidates wife or other>>>>?? of people commenting here!!! Mymy!!
olmsted - December 8, 2010 at 10:23 am
“Then there is the case of [wealthy] students who are studying in the U.S….The “shadow scholar” talks about [wealth] students as among his main clients. Portraying [wealthy] students as cheaters does a great disservice to the majority of honest ones among them and contributes to reinforcing negative stereotypes about these students.”
Since no one is apt to speak up for financially well off students (certainly no CHE author) I’ll offer the above rephrasing. I suspect it will elicit readers of Comments thinking ‘yea, well a LOT of wealthy kids DO cheat’. To which I would respond–to such thinkers and to the author–yea, well, I’ve found plenty of international students who (intentionally or otherwise) violate academic integrity.
As for 4206dinty…are you serious? My spouse may have paid the bills, but wrote the doc? Put your tongue back in your mouth and stop wagging it.
renprof - December 8, 2010 at 1:18 pm
Portfolio grading and cumulative assignments help a lot–it’s more trouble to cheat than it is to write the paper–but it becomes more and more impractical to do as class size goes up.
brundal - December 8, 2010 at 10:43 pm
To rsmulcahy-
Maybe you don’t know what Mr Ritchie means by a “brutish truck-driver look”, but it was perfectly clear to me. Whom is he offending? He may be stretching things a bit by leaping from there to a home for retarded children, but so what? I find candor much more desirable than PC squads hectoring other people to run around apologizing.
snapcase - December 8, 2010 at 11:44 pm
It seems to me that using Google documents to see how students work through multiple drafts of a paper is an easy way to nip this problem in the bud.
consulmendez - December 9, 2010 at 8:21 am
Cheating is part of a huge problem of ethics in higher education and not a problem only of the US, it is now a global issue. The achievement paradigm being very pragmatic allows and promotes many kind of cheatings and we can see how the cheating behavior becomes part of “normality” and many top managers, business leaders and politicians act and take decisions without ethical values. Cheating through shadow scholars is just an example of a whole system of unethical training. Ethics and social responsability are two values we urgently need to include in the HE Curriculums. Bernardo Mendez-Lugo, Former Mexican Scholar, Founder of Universidad Autonoma Metropolitana in Mexico City, now in San Salvador.
sskatz101 - December 9, 2010 at 4:30 pm
I’ve been on both roles in the arena: college classroom teacher & ghostwriter. If the prof can skewer me with his rapier red pen, so be it. But it’s not going to happen. College instructors are terrified of questioning an ethnic minority student’s work. When I write a paper for a barely-literate first-generation Mexican-America or a barely-literate black student, it is inconceivable that a politically-correct instructor will allow himself to doubt the authorship of the work. Instructors are deeply complicit here. Moreover, I really don’t see any problem. I’m doing what I’ve been trained to do, & the student will end up with a degree which will permit him to get a good government job — who needs to know anything to work for the government?
drannmaria - December 10, 2010 at 3:49 am
sskatz101 -
There are, in fact, minority professors, I am one. I’ve never had any problem questioning a Latino or African-American student’s work, or failing a student. Whenever any student is failing, I speak to him or her, explain why and discuss options, e.g., drop the course, work with the TA, go to the writing center for assistance, etc.
Since I have a TA enter grades and have separate grades for multiple choice and essay responses, I can compare the two and see if the student has high scores on multiple choice and low scores on the essays. If so, it suggests a language problem. Both are done in class, so it is unlikely for students to be cheating.
As for papers purchased from other sources – I cannot say it is impossible it has ever occurred in > 20 years of teaching.
As for government jobs, I work as a consultant with plenty of people in the government and the percentage of hard-working, competent people seems to be a little higher than private institutions.
pm9531 - January 5, 2011 at 3:33 pm
Mr Ritchie
So you like to hear the sound of your own voice. Given the blurb you wrote here I doubt if you students, if you have any, feel the same way.
ajcollins - January 6, 2011 at 4:17 pm
Francisco,
Honestly, I have heard of a lot of students purchasing papers or hiring someone to write a paper for them, but this blog is the first that I have heard about “The Shadow Scholar”. You listed a couple of reasons to why the commissioning of writing papers is so widespread, but do you feel that culture barriers for international students could be a cause?
I do feel that this form of cheating is not going anywhere anytime soon. The State of North Carolina’s budget is hurting as far as education is concerned forcing instructors to have larger class sizes causing paper authenticity to be impossible.
American University has a great method in place to inform students of cheating and academic integrity, but what are the odds that their students will not fall into the same trap as other students? Every course syllabus I have ever received stressed plagiarism and the stiff penalties if any student is found plagiarizing, but students continue to plagiarize and get away with it.
I agree that this is a problem that needs to be addressed in further detail before it becomes too big of a problem.
Thanks!
philosophy - January 24, 2011 at 7:10 pm
When vice is easier than virtue, not all but lots of folks (not only students) will choose vice over virtue. To combat this, make virtue easier (or at least less risky) than vice. Make it hard to cheat without getting caught. But doing so would require big changes – smaller classes, more and better trained TAs, more emphasis on teaching and less on research and publication … all of which is unlikely nowadays.