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August 29, 2009, 08:00 AM ET

Technology and the Seduction of Revolution

Laurie's post on bad writing by students wisely cautions against what we might call the nostalgic impulse, that is, the tendency of people to regard everything as heading downward.  It afflicts people middle-age and older, and conservatives, too.  One of the mottos of conservatism is a statement I've seen attributed to Lord Palmerston at the height of Victorian reform: "Change, change, change--all this talk about change--aren't things bad enough already?"

And so, those folks who think student writing keeps getting worse need to check their pessimism for evidence.

But there is another impulse to be identified as well.  It's the opposite one, the "progress" belief, in its extreme form, the claim of "revolution."  We see it in the quotation from Andrea Lunsford: "I think we're in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven't seen since Greek civilization." 

Think about the grand significance of that assertion, and carry out the analogy.  What does it say about people before the Digital Age arrived?

Nonetheless, you hear it a lot in technology discussions.  When Time magazine named "You" the Person of the Year in 2006, it did so because Web 2.0 empowers everyone to be a writer, photographer, reporter, filmmaker, collaborator ..., and Time's Lev Grossman concluded, "it's really a revolution."  Educator Will Richardson says that the "Read/Write Web" is "rewriting the age old paradigms of how things work."  The inventor of the computer mouse, Douglas Englebart once stated that "the digital revoluton is far more significant than the invention of writing or even of printing."

Many of those claims have exploded, for instance, all the talk we heard in the early-00s about how multitasking was an advance beyond linear thinking.  But the revolutionary claims find other outlets, such as Twitter activity in Iran, and, at Stanford, the claims about new writing literacies.

Here's the thing. Laurie correctly states that "young people today write far, far more than any previous generation, and a lot of it they do outside the classroom (!)."  Nielsen counted 2,272 text message per month by teens with cell phones earlier this year.

But with all the reading and writing going on, and with a revolution in process, where are the outcomes?  If the revolution is, in fact, producing creative and inventive new literacies, they should show up somewhere.

But we don't see any gains in reading comprehension for 17-year-olds on NAEP exams, the SAT, or the ACT.  The last NAEP writing exam showed some improvement at the very lowest end, but no improvement in "proficient" or "advanced."  Remedial reading and writing course enrollments are heavy, and the Chronicle's survey of college teachers found only six percent of them claiming that students are "very well prepared" in writing.  And businesses keep spending billions of dollars each year on remedial writing training for employees.

Of course, this doesn't mean that a revolution isn't going on, only that its effects are indeterminate.  That may throw us back upon temperament, the pessimists vs. the optimists. Right now, I'd say the available evidence runs to the former.

Comments

1. luther_blissett - August 29, 2009 at 06:52 pm

Mark, I agree that it's too soon to make giant statements about web 2.0 as a sort of orality/literacy revolution. But I also don't think it makes sense to look for "positive" outcomes of new literacies from old literacy tests. It's like evaluating a novel by the standards of an oral epic.

Here's a question: how long did it take writing-centered cultures to evolve a distinctive or original literary form that was not merely the written equivalent of a pre-existing oral form? Likewise, how long did it take Gutenberg cultures to create distinctive literary forms? I don't know the answers, but it seems like the "positive" results of new literacies often take a while to evolve, while the negative results are often clear from the beginning (such as the loss of memory, the breakdown of communal narrative culture, etc.).

Reading Elijah Wald's new history of pop music, it makes me think about the transition from a sheet music and live performance culture to a phonograph culture. And really, it took nearly 100 years before artists were using phonographs to do much more than merely capture or recreate live performance, even as the phonograph did immediate damage to the live performance and sheet music culture.

So it's not surprising that the first thing we notice with web 2.0 literacies are the declines when tested according to the standards of previous literacies. Which means we should be very cautious, both in our attacks and our celebrations, struggling to preserve what is important from the past while allowing new developments to grow.

2. markbauerlein - August 30, 2009 at 05:25 pm

These are good points, Luther, and I would extend them to the very terms "new literacies" and "old literacies." I'm not even sure what the differences are.

3. v8573254 - August 31, 2009 at 09:36 am

I want to add that the "new literacies" and old ones typically gather excellence from the need/choice-factor for the writer. And, I always wonder if the eternal faculty complainers ever revisit the early essays they wrote in high school or undergraduate days.

4. goxewu - August 31, 2009 at 04:33 pm

Even if "eternal faculty complainers" revisit their own high school or undergraduate essays, they should take into consideration that those essay were written by someone who was academically inclined enough to grow up to be a college professor. If they're going to compare old apples to new apples, and not to new oranges, they ought to compare them to those of their current students who have either professed an ambition to be academics or have the talent for it, and not to those of the general run of current undergraduates.

5. danbloom - September 01, 2009 at 10:16 am

Mark, re the quotation from Andrea Lunsford: "I think we're in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven't seen since Greek civilization."

A well-known forecaster/futurist in the San Francisco area puts it another way: "There is a vast literary shift about to wash over us...."

6. goxewu - September 01, 2009 at 02:25 pm

I can't remember the last time a shift has washed over me.

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