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August 28, 2009, 02:34 PM ET
Bad Student Writing? Not So Fast!
It would be good for the blood pressure of everyone involved in criticizing education—state legislators, education policy professionals, professors, school administrators, parents—to take a deep breath. Put aside the statistics, the studies, the anecdotes, and take a look at the big picture.
Here’s what Edith Hamilton had to say about education, in The Echo of Greece (1957), one of her many trenchant books on the subject of the ancient Greeks:
"If people feel that things are going from bad to worse and look at the new generation to see if they can be trusted to take charge among such dangers, they invariably conclude that they cannot and that these irresponsible young people have not been trained properly. Then the cry goes up, 'What is wrong with our education?' and many answers are always forthcoming."
Note the droll and ironic, “and many answers are always forthcoming.” Perhaps studying people who lived so long ago—people who invented the very idea of education as a route to genuine freedom, and understood freedom to be worthwhile only when coupled with self-control—gave Hamilton one of those calm, stoical uber-minds that comprehends competing pronouncements about education never to be more than opinion.
While the rest of us thrash about interpreting the parade of studies and tests demonstrating that students can no longer think, read, write, do math, know the dates of the Civil War or the fall of Byzantium, or identify a water molecule when it’s softly floating on a glass slide, Hamilton calmly sees ’twas ever thus. In an interesting aside, she also observes that there’s an increase in “educational fervor” whenever there’s a lack of confidence in the state.
I’d go further. The problem of “control freaks” applies to generations as well as to individuals. Older generations never voluntarily let go. They embrace new ideas only grudgingly, and often won’t even try to understand the younger generation they themselves spawned. One of the many tragedies of existence is that the only species that’s equipped by nature to have back-and-forth conversations between generations resists such conversations with all its might.
Clive Thompson’s article on the “new literacy” (Wired Magazine, 24 August) urges those of us who are fretting about the decline in writing, in particular, to buck up. Unlike Hamilton, who points to the eternal past for comfort, Thompson points to the present and the future. He reports on a large, ongoing study at Stanford—the Stanford Study of Writing—directed by Andrea Lunsford, a professor of writing and rhetoric at Stanford University. Her conclusion? "I think we're in the midst of a literacy revolution the likes of which we haven't seen since Greek civilization.”
Thompson writes, “Technology isn’t killing our ability to write. It’s reviving it—and pushing our literacy in bold new directions.” The Stanford study, although incomplete, already shows that young people today write far, far more than any previous generation, and a lot of it they do outside the classroom (!).
While the older generation worries endlessly (frequently employing pretentious prose in the process) over the quality of the writing on Facebook, blogs and Twitter, the younger generation enthusiastically probes new ways to express themselves clearly and concisely (texting and Twitter), to exchange open opinions about every matter under the sun (Twitter and Facebook), and to do all these things in clever, inventive ways. Lunsford sees a link between the modern world of online writing—feisty, conversational, out in public, and concise—and the ancient Greek tradition of argument.
What if the younger generation ends up better writers than their parents--and their professors? Perish the thought!


Comments
1. v8573254 - August 31, 2009 at 09:11 am
Thanks, Laurie, for this. I read the Thmmpson essay last week, and I've been following the Stanford study for several years. You provide another forum for this surprisng (to some) research.
2. dank48 - August 31, 2009 at 10:08 am
This is a healthy reminder that our own perspective on the situation may well be influenced by where we're standing. Plato, if I recall--from reading, not personal communication--was concerned about the deleterious effect widespread literacy would have on people's ability to commit things to memory. Hamilton's view of things isn't really "relevant" in the sense of being based on research, and one can only imagine what her reaction would have been to the education courses prospective teachers have to endure.
But Hamilton's is a long view, over millennia, and she shows no tendency to panic over the fact that change is part of life. She also seems unruffled by the possibility that there are things beyond her control. We could use some of her wisdom today--and her serenity.
3. dank48 - August 31, 2009 at 10:27 am
By the way, "Why Johnny Can't Read" was published in 1955. How on earth we've gotten along for the last fifty-four years, I don't understand. Yes, amazingly enough, there have been problems over the past half-century, but let's bear in mind that most of us wringing our hands over today's illiterate Johnnys are ourselves either the original Johnnys or Johnny's successors.
4. jfb1138 - August 31, 2009 at 10:33 am
If we want to redefine 'writing' to mean, "Not actually 'writing', but putting words having some relationship to what we're trying to communicate", then all is well.
But then, if we redefine 'writing' to mean 'eating peanut butter', there's a statistical increasing in 'writing' also.
5. goxewu - August 31, 2009 at 05:49 pm
What does "putting words" mean?
6. enadler - September 01, 2009 at 10:48 am
Thank you Laurie, for this perspective. The more things change, the more they stay the same? I am reminded of the diary of a 12th-century gentlemen who complained that his son, a student at the University of Paris, only wrote home when he needed money.
Elsa Nadler
7. chrisva - September 06, 2009 at 09:58 pm
I am concerned when people say that because students update their profiles on Facebook by typing words, that they are writing and that this additional writing is of significance.
My students say straight up--No, it's not writing.
Writing as related to students has generally meant some form in which a paragraph is a relevant structure, a form in which students use sustained writing to put forward ideas and defend them.
A more nuanced approach is needed here to see what value we can find in Facebook, Twitter, and the like.
Chris Vander Ark
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