We revised Erin's original C.V. into a résumé, highlighting her writing and editing experience. We condensed her academic experience and added elements that normally would have been played down in a C.V. Since her publications are summarized here, she can list them on a separate sheet.

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• Before Revision

1.) Erin's contact information is condensed into two lines and centered to keep the résumé to one page. You could also give campus and home information on each side. Think about whether you want to emphasize the university information or not. Erin does because of the relationship between her training and desired career and because she can be reached most easily in her lab.

2.) The summary focuses on transferable skills and attributes, particularly those relevant to science writing, editing, and publishing. This category usually would not be included on a C.V.

3.) A word about graphics: We capitalized and boldfaced educational institutions because they are well-respected, and we placed her degrees in boldface because a Ph.D. is required for certain kinds of science editing. If the Ph.D. were of neutral or negative value in the desired career, it would not be boldfaced. Note that we didn't give locations of the educational institutions, because they are well-known. The section headings could also be any number of styles to distinguish them from the content.

4.) We led with "Writing and Editing Experience," which is most relevant to Erin's potential career. Her scholarly writing is summarized on the résumé itself, but detailed in an appended page of publications and presentations. The "Other" category at the end of this section is intended to show both current and long-standing interest in writing. We included the outdated high-school journalism experience on a judgment call that it might help more than hurt. Job titles are underlined, as a means of contrast. Note again that we did not include locations, because all her employment has been at well-known universities. A more typical résumé would include the city and state of employment.

5.) Research experience would be of interest to potential employers, but it is important not to assume that they possess specialized knowledge. Hence, we tried to describe the research and special expertise in fairly general terms. The special-expertise section is fairly broad; she would use a cover letter for further detail, tailored to the particular job.

6.) We combined teaching and presentation experience, which demonstrate similar competencies. We abbreviated "Department" here for space, but it is better to avoid such abbreviations if possible. Course titles may not be necessary, but here they indicate some breadth in her expertise. We summarized Erin's presentations, but with more space, we would have added the line "see appended list."

7.) The affiliations indicate not only Erin's substantive expertise, but also the seriousness of her interest in science writing. A potential employer might take affiliations with a grain of salt, but they seemed worth including.